The honest truth

My eyes were burning as I had been staring at my shoes thinking if I should’ve stayed at home I thought for a moment why could’nt I just be a normal kid.I had been in that train for what felt like a week but had only been three hours.I had thought what would have happened if I had made it to the top of the mountain and then that was it the end of my life…

Beauw had his head sat on my legs at the time.I had picked him up and put him in the empty seat next then that word had started spinning around in my head EMPTY that seat should’ve been filled with my Dad I thought.Even though people thought jessie was my best friend my best friend was actually my Dad and sometimes it felt like it was just me and him sometimes it felt like he was my only friend.

My Mum had a very important job at the time so it was usually me him and bow.I loved my Mum of course but I just didn’t see her much.I had been sick since I was seven and now I’m eleven and I’m still sick.

I had only been on a trip once and that was to Australia and there I nearly got bitten by a venimos snake.As soon as I had put my head on my pillow the train stopped and my head had banged on the back of the chair infront of me Oww.

Hi i am Thom and this is my long write.I did this because we were reading a book in our class and then we had to do a long write about what we thought was going to happen next.I found this challenging because we had to make it like a recount but we also had to put it in first person which is words like I, me, myself and other words that mean yourself.My class got this book because it was book week and when it's book week we get a new book everyday and then the teacher reads the start of it so everyone gets a taste of what it's like and then it goes into our class library and someone can get it out for silent reading in our class.Thanks for reading.

Caterpillar Investagtion

In my class we did a caterpillar Investigation.What we had to do is start with any number and then times it by two then subtract 1 and then keep doing it in a patern.To do this I had to use 2 times tables.I  didn't find this challenging because I have done work like this in other classes so I know how it works and what I need to do.I found this activity very fun.I think my next step is to do this but with 9 times tables because I find that challenging

  The Electroshoe 350



At yaldhurst in rimu 46 kids were asked to test this shoe for 3 weeks it is called the electroshoe 350.
The results were 75% thought they were great the other 15% didn’t really like them.If this shoe were
to be bought at a store it would cost 260$

                                                    Designs

This shoe is made of leather on the back and front of the shoe,gold on the sides of the shoe,
rubber on the soul and inner soul,silk on the inside.It also has electricity running through it.
This helps to give people a boost in athletics and sports.

                                                    Creator of the shoe  

The creator of this shoe is Zack Taylor and the company shoes and electricity helped him create
it in 2008 and came out in 2009 that year the company was having a great year moneywise aswell
as Zack Taylor

                                                    

                             Why was this shoe designed

                      This shoe was designed for sports mainly long jump high jump and
cross country.These shoes are pretty much a cheat.But most people do not
think of them that way since they mostly want to.These designs were made in the 1950s and zack taylor
then found them and claimed that he created them.The first person to buy these shoes was
rich kid douglas henry who was one of the most selfish and bratty kids on the planet.
This shoe also comes with a electric cord to charge it when flat.

                                                   Features

This shoe is made for athletics and sports.Nearly anyone who wears this shoe will become one of the
most sporty in their class.Also this shoe has sprigs that come out of it for sports like rugby and football
and also there is a button to press to make it the same style as a basketball shoe.

In my class over the last two weeks we have been learning how to write a Non Chronological report.
Mine is about a shoe.I have learnt that Non Chronological reports are very different to story and are
usually based on a animal or place.