A while ago I did a recount about athletics day. It was a bit tricky to put it all in past tense. But it was still fun writing about athletics. My goal for next time is to use more descriptive words and use similies and metaphors.
Thursday, 1 November 2018
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Hi Thom, I'm Alex from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you used flip snack to make a book about your experience on athletics day. This reminded me of when I did athletics on the 2nd of November. Maybe next time you could add in some images of athletics day. If you would like to check out my blog here is a link http://wpsalexanderw.blogspot.com/
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