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Wednesday 21 August 2019

My awesome free write

Kia ora bloggers, For a while I have been doing a free write about the famous miracle on the Hudson. I spent quite a while on this book, but to get it right I had to watch the movie first to find out what happens so that I could base my story on that, I did that so that I didn't just make up some story. I have made quite a lot of chapters but decided to just read you the first page/chapter, hope you enjoy. 

Also it would be great if you could give me some feedback, because there's always room for improvement.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 August 2019 at 10:01

    Hi Thom. I like how you sartted your story with sitting in the mane pilot seat stearing at the sky.Also I like how you added Jeff as your co pilots name in your story.

    your sincerely Dom

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  2. Anonymous22 August 2019 at 10:01

    Hi Thom
    I like how you talk about planes.Not many people that i know are into planes so good for you
    Carter

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