Kia ora bloggers, Today I am going to blog about speeches. At the moment in my class everyone is planning and writing their speeches. There are all sorts of different topics happening, but I chose to do my speech on pollution. Below is one of the paragraphs from my speech, could you please give feedback on it because I want to know if it is good or not.
People need to get in and do what needs to be done, clean, It may not sound like fun, It may not sound heroic, but it truly is because every piece of rubbish you pick up you’re making a difference, you’re saving an animals life, So get in and do the work
Goodbye bloggers. Hope you liked the example of my speech.
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